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If you remember my thread a while back about how I make money off of redemption games at arcades, well I finally finished my epic guidebook after a couple years of fine-tuning my techniques.

Its not pretty (imo) but I'd like to get your guys' opinion on it

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I looks OK to me- not too long and too the point.

My suggestion - make it look pretty and professional so potential customers have more faith in your product.

Also, the image at the bottom of page is not loading for me - the one under payment buttons.

Personally, as I am on-line about 15 hours a day, I like to have a live help button on my sites. I dont know if it will suit your site, but if you think it will, I found livezilla a handy program and its free.

Nice plug for the site by the way
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If you remember my thread a while back about how I make money off of redemption games at arcades, well I finally finished my epic guidebook after a couple years of fine-tuning my techniques.

Its not pretty (imo) but I'd like to get your guys' opinion on it

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Perfect information. All you need is a pretty template to go with it.
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Perfect information. All you need is a pretty template to go with it.
Ive been searching for templates, but the good ones that I find are like...hundreds of dollars :O
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or you can buy tickets wholesale to feed the machine. when i was in high school we bought 350,000 tickets at party city for 60.00 and walked out with an xbox 360
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a 40 year old man taking about he is goes and plays games at dave and busters? lol
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Ive been searching for templates, but the good ones that I find are like...hundreds of dollars :O
Last time I checked you uploaded a photo with stacks of 20's. You should have stacks of 100's now.
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